Rejected And Forsaken

Synopsis

What would a young wolf do when he is rejected by his mate and pack? David, the true heir of redmoon pack had to face that. His only support, his dad and grandpa died in the war against vampires and soon, someone poisoned his grandma…. leaving him all alone. What’s worse? He was framed and accused of his Grandma’s death. He flees……… What was he going to do now?

Review

Born a King, Rejected a Freak

Forget everything you *think* you know about werewolf stories, because Rejected And Forsaken throws a pregnant, abandoned Luna into a barren wasteland right out of the gate. This isn’t your cozy pack drama; this is a raw, unflinching dive into the brutal realities of a world where supernatural status doesn’t guarantee a warm welcome, especially if you’re carrying a pup that kicks like a soccer star. The opening chapters don’t just hint at hardship; they immerse you in the scorching sun and desperate search for shelter, setting a tone of immediate, visceral struggle that demands attention.

The Male Lead — David, The Forsaken Heir

David Barton is not your run-of-the-mill alpha-in-training; he’s a complex, defiant force shaped by loss and prejudice. We first meet him as a joyful child, a “joy” to his father, Devin, who dotes on him, seeing the echo of his lost mate in David’s “baby blue eyes” and “funny personality.” This tender familial bond is critical, providing a foundation of love before the world turns against him. Devin, an Alpha grieving his mate for nine years, pours all his affection into David, making David’s subsequent rejection feel like a double blow – not just to him, but to his father’s carefully rebuilt world.

David’s true nature, however, shines through in his resilience and inherent sense of justice. At fourteen, his lycan wolf awakens, manifesting as “red eyes,” a trait that immediately alienates him from his peers. Despite being called “scary” and “weird,” he declares, “If being a lycan is a trait inherited from my mother, I am proud of it.” This isn’t just teenage defiance; it’s a deep-seated pride in his identity, even when it makes him an outcast. His protective instinct is also evident when, after beating three bullies “down to a pulp,” his father knows “David is not the kind of boy who would attack with out a reason.” This implies a moral compass, that his actions, however violent, stem from a justified place.

The defining moment for David, and arguably the crux of his character, comes with the brutal double rejection in Chapter 9. Elder Barron, consumed by rage, screams, “You are a freak, a curse and a bad omen. I reject you as the alpha of this pack.” Immediately after, his supposed mate, Hailey, publicly shames him, choosing his best friend Cade and declaring, “You look hideous David. I don’t want you.” This public humiliation and betrayal, especially from a mate, would break many. But David’s internal monologue, though not explicitly stated in that moment, hints at a simmering resolve. He’s not just a victim; he’s a future avenger, already plotting to “fight back” and uncover who was “the real one behind his grandma’s” death. This transformation from rejected heir to solitary, determined warrior is what makes him compelling beyond the standard alpha template.

The Female Leads — Marsha’s Grit and Carol’s Spark

This story introduces not one, but two intriguing female leads, each on a distinctly different, yet equally compelling, path. Marsha, whose story opens the narrative, is plunged into an immediate, desperate fight for survival. She’s a Luna, but one “excused from the Luna duties because of her health” – which is to say, her pregnancy. Found on a “barren land” under a “scorching sun,” she is literally and figuratively forsaken. Her agency, initially, is purely reactive: shielding her eyes, placing a hand on her “swollen tummy” after a kick, and “looking around for a shelter.” Yet, her continued presence, her grunting through sleepless nights because her “unborn pup seemed to be super active,” demonstrates an undeniable resilience and connection to the life within her. Her journey, even in these brief glimpses, is one of enduring immense physical and emotional hardship, forcing her to find strength she likely never knew she had.

Later, we meet Carol, a vibrant contrast to Marsha’s initial despair. She’s a vampire princess, sneaking out of her “palace” and clambering up “thick vines” to her bedroom window, clearly a rebel with a cause. Carol is proactive, driven by curiosity and a refreshingly open mind in a world seemingly defined by species-based animosity. Her friendly introduction to David – “Hello. My name is Caroline. But you can call me carol” – defies the expected hostility between werewolf and vampire. What makes her relatable is this spirited defiance and her apparent disregard for ancient feuds, choosing to connect on a human (or rather, supernatural) level. She surprises with her eagerness to meet David again, a “constant grin… pasted on her face,” showing a genuine excitement for connection that cuts through the grim atmosphere surrounding David’s rejection. Her journey promises to be one of bridging divides and potentially challenging her own royal expectations.

The Chemistry — A Spark in the Shadows

The romantic tension, as hinted in these early chapters, is less about instant, overpowering physical attraction and more about a slow, deliberate intrigue, a cautious spark ignited against a backdrop of betrayal and danger. The primary connection forming is between David and Carol, and it’s built on a foundation of mutual curiosity and a touch of the forbidden. David, fresh from the crushing rejection by his mate, Hailey, and the elders, is a wounded animal. When he encounters Carol, a vampire, he’s immediately wary, “double checked if I had masked my scent properly.” This initial guard is a testament to his ingrained prejudice and his current precarious situation.

However, Carol’s disarming friendliness, her unburdened smile, and her easy introduction, “Hello. My name is Caroline. But you can call me carol,” immediately begin to chip away at David’s defenses. There’s an undeniable pull in their interactions, even brief ones. David, who has just been deemed “hideous” by his own kind, finds himself “eager to meet someone before” when it comes to Carol. This eagerness, coupled with his reflection that his life “may look calm but he had to prepare for some thing big,” suggests that Carol represents a new, unexpected source of hope or partnership. The power dynamic is initially imbalanced due to David’s vulnerability and Carol’s seemingly privileged, yet rebellious, position. However, it swiftly evolves into one of burgeoning equality based on shared clandestine meetings and genuine interest. While overtly steamy content isn’t present in these initial chapters, the promise of a deep, potentially dangerous connection, forged in secrecy and defiance of species boundaries, is palpably suggestive.

Plot & World — A Crucible of Conflict and Corruption

The core conflict driving *Rejected And Forsaken* is multi-layered, beginning with Marsha’s harrowing abandonment and then expanding into David’s brutal rejection and subsequent fight for survival and justice. The world is a dangerous place, divided by ancient enmities between werewolves and vampires, and riddled with internal corruption within the werewolf pack itself. This isn’t just a romance; it’s a struggle for power, identity, and retribution. What keeps you reading is the swift, brutal turns of fate and the promise of David’s inevitable comeback.

This story brings a unique element to the werewolf genre by introducing a “lycan” with red eyes, distinguishing it from standard werewolf lore. This specific trait makes David not just an Alpha heir, but a marked individual, feared and ostracized by his own kind. The mystery surrounding his “grandma’s” death, hinted at in David’s resolve to “fight back” and uncover the truth, adds another layer of intrigue beyond personal vendettas. Furthermore, the Elders’ corrupt motivations – wanting to oust David because “he would eventually find out about their ill deeds” – paints a vivid picture of a broken system that desperately needs an overhaul. The high stakes, from Marsha’s survival to David’s quest for vengeance against a deceitful pack and warring factions, make it impossible to look away.

Honest Assessment — Trope Handling

This story leans heavily into the classic “Rejected Mate” and “Forbidden Love” tropes, but with a few interesting twists. The “Rejected Mate” trope, often a source of heartbreak and character development, is delivered with shocking bluntness by Hailey, making David’s humiliation profound. What’s compelling here is how it’s intertwined with his simultaneous rejection as Alpha by the corrupt elders, amplifying the stakes beyond a simple relationship drama. The “Forbidden Love” aspect, with a werewolf (lycan) and a vampire princess, is a staple, yet the immediate, almost naive friendliness of Carol hints at a fresh take on the classic animosity.

Fans of the genre will undoubtedly love the underdog protagonist, the raw emotional impact of the rejection, and the promise of a powerful comeback arc for David. The hint of a strong, unique supernatural ability (lycan with red eyes) also offers a departure from the usual. However, some readers might find the rapid shifts in perspective and time in the early chapters a bit jarring, requiring a moment to orient themselves. It’s a story that clearly prioritizes plot momentum and emotional intensity over a slow, gentle introduction, which might divide those who prefer a more gradual build-up.

Verdict & Call to Action

This book is specifically for readers who crave a dark, emotionally charged paranormal romance featuring a resilient, outcast hero and the promise of a fierce, unconventional partnership. It stands out from similar “rejected mate” books by immediately stripping its male lead of *everything* and offering a fascinating, dangerous cross-species connection as his only solace.

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